As a group to make sure we would be ready to make our sequence was to complete pre production work that include location finders checklist, risk assessment and evaluation sheets, final script, storyboard and questionnaire. However due to lack of communication between the group outside of class time the questionnaire was never fully completed and handed out.
Once we had completed all our pre production work and were ready to progress onto the next stage of filming our initial project. I completed my script and presented my ideas to the group and made some changes after receiving their feedback. I was meant to of completed a treatment for the editing and sfx of our film however I had difficultly understanding what to write. Once I had knowledge of what was asked of me, another member of our group had completed that treatment and was found to be satisfactory.
Our intial script
INT. CELLAR.
Room is dark except spotlight overhanging an Old wooden Chair in centre of the room.
Room is dark except spotlight overhanging an Old wooden Chair in centre of the room.
INT. CELLAR. DAY
opens with a black screen with sound of someone being beaten up. Another option is to have black screen sound of male footsteps, button being pressed is heard, music starts then sound of person being beaten when picture appears the music turns diegetic. MAN sitting in chair blindfolded and tied up. He’s been beaten, Unconscious, heavy breathing. MAN awakens from unconscious, panic. Blindfold is lifted. Man is disorientated struggle to focus. MAN is nervous and in pain. MAN cannot see anything clearly just shadows. Woman walks out of the shadow and into the light. Woman paces around man. Woman then leans in over the mans shoulder and whispers
opens with a black screen with sound of someone being beaten up. Another option is to have black screen sound of male footsteps, button being pressed is heard, music starts then sound of person being beaten when picture appears the music turns diegetic. MAN sitting in chair blindfolded and tied up. He’s been beaten, Unconscious, heavy breathing. MAN awakens from unconscious, panic. Blindfold is lifted. Man is disorientated struggle to focus. MAN is nervous and in pain. MAN cannot see anything clearly just shadows. Woman walks out of the shadow and into the light. Woman paces around man. Woman then leans in over the mans shoulder and whispers
WOMAN
I warned you the day we met
EXT. TAVERN STREET. DAY
Busy street, Woman with a bag over one shoulder and man with hands in pockets/ texting on phone/ talking on the phone. Walking towards each other. Woman fumbles through bag, she drops it in front of man belongings fall out. man stops to help pick things up, there eyes meet. they stand and have conversation and flirt (no dialogue). boyfriend turns up girl then acts quiet, awkward look between boyfriend and man. Man then drags woman away (don't actually drag but resistance if obvious from woman)
Busy street, Woman with a bag over one shoulder and man with hands in pockets/ texting on phone/ talking on the phone. Walking towards each other. Woman fumbles through bag, she drops it in front of man belongings fall out. man stops to help pick things up, there eyes meet. they stand and have conversation and flirt (no dialogue). boyfriend turns up girl then acts quiet, awkward look between boyfriend and man. Man then drags woman away (don't actually drag but resistance if obvious from woman)
MAN V/O
I remember the moment it all began
My decent down this road, the reason I’m hear now
The day I met ELEKTRA
I remember the moment it all began
My decent down this road, the reason I’m hear now
The day I met ELEKTRA
few moments then both turn around and look at each other
INT. CELLAR. DAY
MAN in chair woman pacing around him. Man struggling to focus
MAN in chair woman pacing around him. Man struggling to focus
EXT. PARK. DAY
MAN and WOMAN sitting in park. Out of sight of other people. Laughing. Close to each other.
MAN and WOMAN sitting in park. Out of sight of other people. Laughing. Close to each other.
INT. CELLAR. DAY.
MAN in chair woman pacing around him.
MAN in chair woman pacing around him.
INT. CAR. DAY.
Opens on shot of phone vibrating on front seat of car, sound of laughter in background. The laughter stops woman reaches for phone answers the phone. Woman’s face changes as the phone call is from her boyfriend (phone call is not heard). Serious mood sets in. They start to get dressed. Panic sets in.
Opens on shot of phone vibrating on front seat of car, sound of laughter in background. The laughter stops woman reaches for phone answers the phone. Woman’s face changes as the phone call is from her boyfriend (phone call is not heard). Serious mood sets in. They start to get dressed. Panic sets in.
INT. CELLAR. DAY
Man exhausted in pain. WOMAN pacing around chair.
MAN V/O
So this is how it ends
So this is how it ends
WOMAN
did you really think a girl like me
would ever be interested in a guy like you.
lets be honest the only reason I was with you
was to keep an eye on you for the....
Man comes out off shadows. Stands beside woman. Man whispers in her ear. Woman has distressed look on face. Man walks out of room. Woman then paces behind man. A clear plastic bag is placed over man’s head. He struggles.
WOMAN
(whispering in his ear with a tear going down one cheek? kisses one cheek leaves lipstick kiss on cheek)
I’m sorry
Play dead/ I’ll be seeing you/ wait for me/ give me 20 minutes
fades to black then goes to ECU of mans eyes open then title credits begin.
I’m sorry
Play dead/ I’ll be seeing you/ wait for me/ give me 20 minutes
fades to black then goes to ECU of mans eyes open then title credits begin.
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